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Monday, 16 December 2019

summer learning journey week 1.

this week for summer learning journey week 1. We had to make a list of 10 items then I had to put a description why I choose it.

3 comments:

  1. Kia orana Diana,

    My name is Mani and I am going to be joining you on the Summer Learning Journey as a blog commenter. I am so excited that you are joining us for the Summer Learning Journey 2019-2020. Have you done this programme before?

    This year I am so excited that I get to read over the Manaiakalani blogs, especially because I have been to your school and met some of your fellow students! I am really looking forward to summer, aren't you? In my spare time I like spending time with my family and hanging out with my friends. I also love to exercise and write songs in my spare time. What are you looking forward to doing this summer?

    I like how you have really thought about what food items you would take and also how much or how many you would take too. You may have forgotten, but maybe have a think about why you chose these items. For example, “I picked water because it is great for keeping hydrated’. Also by adding some bright colours or a few pictures of the food items to your blog post I think it would really catch people’s attention, so just think about it. :)

    I look forward to reading more of your blog posts Diana, keep up the mahi! :)

    Nga mihi,
    Mani

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  2. Hi Diana,

    I really like how much food you said you were going to bring. But litres are a measurement of liquid. You should also write down why you brought those foods.

    Great Job Diana!

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  3. Hi Diana!
    This blog post was great. Were you told to be specific of how much your food had to be?
    Blog you later
    ~ Florence

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